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but for to break through,

          come to,
upon the waking world

  without context.


"what is it that has been happening
  these past few months,
when i go to shut my eyes?"

in memory if found,
  there is nothing-
the lack of everything
  which should be.

  color.

sight.

form.

the vigor of meaning.

there is an absolute  darkness
where activity was once held,
stored, used
to shape interpretation.

"what is it that could be,
  or have been,
which i have now lost?

how many questions?
    answers?

what of this daily life
  could change?"

the incessant
desire.

a glimpse.

the fear of losing
one's self

in discarding

the language
of the soul

-the crass intangibles
  left only to the
  deciphering
  inside-

 

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  • checkmate
    November 25, 2009

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    i love the words you use to write this. they are different, somehow, and the piece you create turns out just awesome. i love it, esp. this part:

    there is an absolute darkness
    where activity was once held,
    stored, used
    to shape interpretation.