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recovered

                                      Here is to healing,
                                    Here is to being free,
I now know what it is like to go a day without fighting this fight.

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It's short but ya know sometimes it doesn't have to be long to get out what you feel!

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
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  • DanceSingAct4life
    November 2
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    I agree with denise20! You're right this poem is short but powerful!!


  • denise20
    October 27

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    Breathtaking

    i have to disagree with verminvomit, i love the last line (love the first 2 aswell)
    Because it is a fight,and even if thats really depressing, you find hope for a better way of life,just in one sentence.I think that's awsome

    take care!

    denise


  • jessibabix33
    October 3

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    hmm...

    it's very nice. i was kind of wondering if you could get the point across with only three lines, but you did :] it's powerful and it shows a message. good luck with your recovery; i have been there before, and i know how it feels.

    reviewback xx


  • VerminVomit
    September 30

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    Even with just three lines, you can say a lot. Recovery feels good.
    I really liked the first two lines, but you sort of ruined the poem with the 3rd one. Couldn't you have worded it differently because "figting this fight" kills the poem.