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Someone

Betrayed, angry, hurt, stunned.
I can't survive too much more.
Another hit and I might crumple,
Someone give me the why and what for.

Sad, depressed, guilty, alone.
I can't deal with this again.
Another time and I will fall
Someone tell me what has been.

Musing, gory, terrifying, war.
I can't believe you left me here.
Another chance and I'd do it differently.
Someone help me through my tears.

Nightmarish, crazed, reminisced, carved.
I can't understand what this means.
Another minute and it's all over.
Someone keep this together at the seams.

Fear, tears, lashing out, lost.
I can't breathe under this pain.
Another choice and it might go another way.
Someone support me, keep me sane.

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  • fallendust
    October 28

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    This poem is very well written and expresses alot. I can relate to most of the feelings portrayed in this write. The flow of this is good! I love the line "I can't breathe under this pain." That is my favorite line for it seems to sum up how I feel to the T. Impressive! Great work indeed!!!!
    Sincerely,
    Sarah


  • Wonderland-Crumpets
    October 5

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    I think you got your fealings across well. It doesn't flow as nicely as most of your other work does, but I like the form. I know how it feels to be desperate for help out of depression...