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Loss

A misery so profound
A loss so deep
Not seeing why
You left me.

Knowing your heart
Seeing your mind
Weeping at the
Knowledge you left.

Deep in my heart
Knowing the truth
Seeing that I
Will always love you.

Knowing you still
Love me deeply
Yet not knowing
Why you left.

Leaving me alone
And broken in two
Missing half my soul
Being without you.

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  • Byepolar bare
    September 28

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    Oh fyre, I'm so sorry to hear about this. Hearts have a peculiar way of mending, provided we let them, so I hope you can do that. Losing that love so sweet is never an easy thing to go through. I hope you can find some solace in your writing.


    • FyreFox
      September 28
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      Thank you

      That means a lot Bare.... I hadnt been able to write about this until a couple of days ago, so hopefully I'm making progress.....