It took one person to show me a way,
She didnt know it but from then I wasn't the same,
I didnt know her well but shes the reaon why I became
Content,
Will never see her again, her friends are mourning,
18 too young, gone without warning
And we all know, a new door needs to be opened
This world has grown to old.
Author notes
Basically, there was this amazing girl where I worked who came with her best friend to work there too and when i met her she had this amazing ability to make you feel like your going somewhere, like an equal and appreciated. At just 18 this summer she was taken too young. I didnt know her well at all but its how she made me feel and picked me up the few months before she died. Now I've lost this sensation of happiness and my friends are non exsistant. We are all taking care of her close friends, but she will be missed very, very much by everyone. So that is why it ties in with the quote. Personally.
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it bites hard when we lose our comfort and inspiration, i am sorry you are having to feel this because i know how it aches, you are incredibly strong and i am positive that you enriched that young lady's life as well
your poem is short but quite full of a whallup of feeling, keep on writing, you have a talent there in your possession, thanks for sharing
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Humm...a curious and intriguing take bring the message of the relationship around..love the depth and the declarion of the thoughts as well..well done..and many thanks for sharing it...
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