Life flows on freely
at times we struggle in vain -
every now and then
we may find a little Zen -
peace and quietude within.
Author notes
Image: 'Zen' by Japanese Calligraphy: http://www5.big.or.jp/~otake/hey/kanji/fude10.htm
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A contest entry
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Thank you so much for this entry
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that sounds like something i need to tape on my wall, i mean that. i sat here a few minutes thinking about it to. i mean lately i think i shouldn't have left. Is this something you got from zen? keep it flowing
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Thank you...
Life. Sometimes it hands us a bouquet of flowers, at other times, an empty cup... I have no answers, just the great universe and all the poetry flowing within it. There is so much to reflect on. And like you, I sometimes wonder why I left my past behind. But like the poem 'Desiderata' says so well, "And whether or not it is clear to you, no doubt the universe is unfolding as it should." Here is a great piece to tape to your wall: http://www.spirasolaris.ca/Desiderata.html Thanks again, and good luck in all you do. Take care. 
Peace,
Cyn
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You've nicely crafted your thought in the form of this Tanka.
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Nicely omitted form. I feel the vibes flow within this piece. You have chosen your words precisely and the poem itself, stellar message. Nicely written.
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Amen there is hope for ones soul yet when times in our lives gives us those now and thens.Profound. Well done. Blessings.
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I agree with you - Every Now And Then - but we must go free to find the right way to do it. Like you did with your poetry.
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Oops Forgot the clappies...sorry..
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When everyday life has given more than you can handle, it is then one finds the inner peace within.. Excellent Cyn. May your day be filled with smiles...Peace and love always...mal....
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