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Conscious and Unconscious

Just do it.
Do what?
End it.

End what?
Your stupidity.
Yes?

Your insecurity.
Hm?
Your alone.

Am I?
Yes.
Where are you?

In here.
In where?
Within you.

Oh?
There you go again!
Again what?

Questioning me.
Sorry.
Tempting my authority.

I apologize.
Seducing my wrath.
I regret.

You should.
I do.
You will.

Now do it.
Do what?
For God's sake!

Sorry...?
I'll do it.
You will?

Yes.
What, how, when?
Just rest, sleep.

Sure.
NOW!
Okay.

It's not hard.
What?
or rather it's not sharp.

What?
The knife.
Oh....

Perhaps another time?
Another what?
Perhaps later, just sleep.

Author notes

Just...some random...I dunno. Is it just me or can anybody else understand my insanity? (Oh, I'm not suicidal...it's just a poem)

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Comments

  • xXjadeyXx
    September 28
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    madd

    i really really like this i dont know why but its so intreaging


    • brokenpoet
      September 30
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      lol, thanks. I'm not even sure why that came out of me, lol.