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Tears of Angels are Fire

Tears on fire
Shimmering down my cheeks
Highlighting my grin as angels cry
My voice rising to sing to deaths awakening
Come, make me break, make me bleed
Everything is burning in ecstasy
Destruction is at the gates of heaven
Dominating my body from the inside
Making me dance to its flame
It consumes me like sex to a virgin
Taking over as the sky opens with angel tears
Setting the world ablaze from its fire

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