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A-Bomb


sheets
lie
that
there
will
never
be
tomorrow
in
today's
sunset

.

there
will
never
be
you
in
tomorrow's
laughing
sunrise
.

and
there
will
never
be
a
me
left
in
dying
hydrogen
fires
of
past
meets
future
meets
hiroshima

.

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  • Candy Morphine
    September 28

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    that ending is insanely well conducted and
    the formatting is just, just excellent.

    amazing.
    iloveit.

    • NothingButShrooms
      September 28
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      thanks !
      its been a while that ive written
      so getting back into it has been difficult.

  • ThEcHoSeNoNe
    September 27

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    Very intriguing, I like the full stop in between each part of the poem and at the end, it's almost as if you cant seem to fathom what you are writing about and are in awe thinking about it in between.

    • NothingButShrooms
      September 28
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      thanks so much!
      yeah, the fullstop really is my pauses as my mind was understanding wat i was writting..


  • etoile
    September 27

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    wow.
    the ending of this is powerful.
    I really like the way you wrote it too.. with one word on each line.
    this is quite amazing

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