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Hate to Love

You're new to me
and though I've disliked so long
suddenly, you're fresh and sweet
and I'm fighting back

I'm fighting you hard
wanting to keep my space
you're making a hole for yourself in my heart
I can feel each part start to move away

And you're cocky
you know you're gorgeous
I want to hit you so much
I want to make you feel reality

and then, I simply want you
with every pore of my skin
with every inch of my being
why do you seem so lovely?

it's starting to come into my dreams
the desire in your eyes
and I know I'm not your type
I'm just some girl you met online

i should be happy you're nice
instead of contemplating the ifs
but deep down inside, I know
you could tear me away from the ones I love

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Prompt 1.
I'm writing about a guy I've known for a year, but whom I met only this week.
Online, we spoke somewhat often..but never seemed to get along.
As soon as we met, everything seemed to snap into place.
And I realized it would be bad if I liked him.

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  • MJ Forgives
    September 29

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    Wow really good poem. In a way I can relate to that. I hope you do well in my contest and thanks for your entry. Love and Peace!
    -Jess