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Pinecone Hangar

Zone out
see the aches, the pains
does it matter? The answer isn't happiness
you were holding it back
because you thought that's what you needed
take as long as you need
until it makes you laugh

Now return
without the hate,
check your target
associate

You'll feel better

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  • Shantell
    September 27

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    Zone in
    blind to love, to share
    does it matter? The question is sadness
    and I wasn't holding back
    because I knew what you wanted
    the time to eliminate
    until it makes you cry

    Leave now
    return my love,
    check your mirror
    connect

    You'll feel better


    • riskybusiness
      October 1

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      In opposite, it sounds like the poem means something completely different than I intended. Quite awesome though.

      Yours is sort of a downer