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Eyes of confusion

See the eyes look up at you
To see sadness and anger
What do these eyes hold, nothing but confusion
There lost and alone
The tears fall as the angels cry

The sky clears as the tears disappear.
But soon to fade back to black
The darkened skys of black and gray
The tears turn to blood
as the fall one by one

The secrets they hold
The information never found
The keys we held so close
Have now Disappeared to the darkness
To be hidden forever

Secrets keep locked away
Hiding in the seas of black
With the spirits of the lost.
The hearts of the many.




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  • Fallen-Thumper
    September 29

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    i realyl loved tis piece and i really loved the last stanza, it says so much, great job and an amazing write.


  • Fallen-Thumper
    September 29
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    brill