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Loving her

All i ever think about
Is, when will i die?
I sit there contemplating
My suicide

Im wounded in pain
And wish to leave this earth
But then i think of all the people
Who dont even know what they're worth

I want to fall back
Into never ending success
But that isnt possible
Since im always put through stress

I wished to be in her arms...
And she finally came through
Now my life doesnt have to end..
Since she said "I love you"

Im complete without a doubt
No thoughts of suicide
I love her and she loves me
No one can break our bide

Im loving her

Author notes

I love Cassandra. She recently said she loved me. I loved her. She completes me.

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