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~Chaos From A Distance~

No matter what blood stains this precious land,
no matter how many good men fall,
mountains will continue to rise.
Trees, even split by lightning,
will firmly hold their place,
and though tears will leak
from eyes to cheeks,
Sun and Moon
keep their
pace,

and despite the  most terrible night storms,
the stars will shimmer behind the clouds,
and The Way will thus continue
beyond all else existing:
a way that never frets.
It knows the chaos
from a distance
however
close it
gets.

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  • PoetessA.L.OPrunty
    September 27

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    Creative in Pen & Pattern

    Christina,
    I am pleased that a Poetess such as yourself has posted some of your works to the site. Your ability to weave words into masterpieces is amazing to me, and I have been inspired by serveral of your literary works...

    A. L. O'Prunty

    • Thank You, April.

      This syllabic form is fun to play with; the challenge is working it into something poetic, but I've not taken the ethere (as a visual novelty) very seriously to date.