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Two-twenty six in the morning
and I’m lying here in the rain
wishing I had an umbrella
for the rougher weather
But it’s okay
because I’m only soaked to the skin
and there’s nothing rougher
than sand paper and water
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Very nice one Karen. I like this one.
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there's layers of textures here
and i can only imagine what's under the skin...
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Once again, I feel like you've written something reflecting my recent thoughts. Even if that only happens in the mind of the reader, that connection is such a powerful thing. This almost feels accepting and sarcastic at the same time in a blend that just simply glows.
Of course, I'm probably completely wrong about the intended feel of this, but hey, I'm just the reader. What do I know?
Beautifully done, my friend.
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beutiful . ... why oh why do we forget the simple things ... like rain and flesh ... hmmm ... sorry i rambled there ... great piece momma karen!!!!
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Ehhh, umbrellas are only devices for conducting lightning anyway, Karen. The storms will pass, my Friend. They always do. 
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