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Tomorrow

If I could i would
I`d give you my very last breath
but it seems what you really need
is Tomorrow
and every second with you is fragile
its as if together we touch time
but for the future it is faster and faster
with every blink further and further

We know what we want
you and i
and a million pressures wont know us to break
no matter the abuse we take
because in our own selfish-way
tomorrow is ours
maybe not this day
or the next
but each day after
faster and faster
moving forward i am fearless
you are too
you have but only to hold my hand
to see you do!

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  • AlexandraHamilton
    September 27

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    its as if together we touch time <--- this sentence caught me, I mean really caught my mind, as I read it. It's beautiful, as is the rest of the poem. Keep writing