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Can You Hear?

Come away with me.
Let us follow this trail through the trees
Littered with trinkets of past lovers,
And those who've give up hope.

Take my hand as I watch the sun
filtering through the trees to dance upon your skin.
I'm here to sweep you off your feet,
Forever into these arms of mine.

Would it be okay if I stole your breath
as suddenly as you've stolen my heart?
And in return, I'll share with you my own
with each flutter of these butterflies.

Here, lay with me upon this lush green.
Rest your head upon my chest.
Listen intently, all the while knowing,
My heart calls out your name

Author notes

written september 26....i like this.
my writing skills are horrid now XD

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  • lukes.lover
    September 27

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    omg! glen this is great. o my.. its so beautiful and sweet and lovin.
    ur writing skills are not horride. if anything they are better and more meaningfull now.
    i love this writing.. great job hun.. i love it.. im sure your boyfriend loves it to!
    loveses ya! haha


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    September 27

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    Wow..the melody of the hearts..and the beauty o the love is melted in each other and spreaded over the whole impact of the poetry here..well done..