Mediation
Gateway
Suddenly
Opens
Gives
Visions
Of
Future
Days
Recognizes
Older
Self
Metaphysics
Explains
All
In
Holographic
World
Time
Flows
To
Babylon
Author notes
Written at the Hurricane Cafe
7th Ave & Bell St Seattle, Wa
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The spirit of Babylon raises some interesting questions. I like this.
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Thanks for an intriguing comment; compliment, and applause, for I do appreciate them.
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Simple depth releases possibilities both to the one how enters and to the one seen. Nicely done.
Marianne
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Aye, methinks you may have caught the essence of this write. Thanks for the comment; compliment, and applause for I do appreciate them.
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Very nicely done. You have a way of saying alot with the absolute minimum of words. Babylon can mean many things to many people... confusion and death? luxary and decadence? a center of learning? It is in the eye of the beholder
Mike
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Aye, 'tis so depending on one's life experience. Thanks for the thoughtful comment; compliment, and applause for I do appreciate them.
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Which could...
be a dangerous place to find one's self. Historically, Babylon was a place of confusion and death. I am assuming that your "Babylon" is more in keeping with a point of creation or a birthplace. Which was also true of the historical Babylon.
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Aye, depending on which plane of reality "Babylon" sits. Thanks for your thoughtful comment; implied compliment, and applause for I do appreciate.
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Worlds which are just holographic
Favour friends who're telepathic
As one passes through the gate
Helps them both communicate? -
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Aye, tis so true. Thank you Keith, Methiks you understood the meaning.
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