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Bull Creek

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I walked  along peaceful Bull Creek
meandering through the valley
Healing and inspiration I did seek
and my soul to forever tally...

With the vibrations of Nature
Her beauty I always visualize
for it strengthens and ensures
my heart She does mesmerize

 

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picture is courtesy of Photobucket

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  • wander of the sky
    November 1
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    this is beautiful


  • Little Lesley
    October 5
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    Nice poem. Nature...I love nature.


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    October 4

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    serene as the creek flows with pleasure of the day, thank you for joining in good luck
    Linda


  • LadyDementia gold member
    October 2

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    Beautifully done! I felt like I was there, hearing the water bubble over the rocks seeking inspiration. A wonderful take on the picture, neatly penned


  • Enchanted Legacy
    September 30

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    WOW


    Fantastic Karen, I wish you all the best in the contest. you did a good job!


  • wander of the sky
    September 28
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    very beautiful


  • Rheea gold member
    September 27

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    while away the hours in your paradise sweet sister.


  • PrincessOfFire
    September 27

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    May I suggest you add 'the' to this sentence?
    I walked along ' the' peaceful Bull Creek
    Other than that a lovely description of the picture. From your words I can hear the water running, baling, birds, insects,,,,,,I smell many fragrances in the air,,,,,and last of all the peace it all brings within me. Very good. Rose


  • Lady Australis silver member
    September 27
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    this is beautiful fgm


  • Denerica
    September 27

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    Beautiful words to the pic, streams, waterfalls do give off that vibration, not only to captivate us but strengthen our hearts as you mentioned. Well done. Blessings.

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