The calm before the storm
the reaction to the action
of the turmoil in the 'morn
right before chaos happens.
Early light is the best
time to strike
As the darkness gives
way to the light
humans notice not
the consummation
night to day,
nor
seldom acknowledge
when the night weds
again without delay.
In a list
A contest entry
- A Beautiful Mind Own's its Experience by Blueskywonder.
1750 points, ended October 26, 6 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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everything is in order and in harmony
what we perceive is not and so what we create is not,
what we see is what we get
we miss the mark
congradulations on your well deseved gold
god bless you my friend...
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A wonderful piece pointing out the harmony's and equilibriam of all that is Thankyou for sharing... good luck!
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thank you
for the gold trophy on this contest.
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So I really liked how you relate the calm before the storm to the breaking dawn and the following chaos of the day. That has left an image burned in my mind. The next time I watch the sunset I will see it in a different way
Thanks for sharing your talent, Bravo!
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beautiful writing, very inspirational
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yes, we are creating realities born of unatural space living illusion when its staring us tight in the face, the harmony of motion
Great write my friend... a pleasure as always to read your wonderful thoughts
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this is definately a beautiful mind at work
you done a great job here love
good luck in the contest
Love
Tory
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