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A Zen Moment

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time will never stop
being itself, even when
it faces itself...

 

past, present, future

meet, regardless of themselves

or their vain efforts...

 

 

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Image: 'Take It Back' by Andréia on Flickr.com: http://www.flickr.com/photos/deia/2909545417/in/set-72157613026438754/

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  • Kathleen a Nazarene
    October 11

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    Wonderful!

    This is most certainly Zen! Love the flow and essence of this & the pix to accompany it is great. So....now another dimension...Zen poetry. Something new to learn all the time. My time is now running low with my energy. Took my & should've been in bed an hour ago. All the best in the Contest. I think you should surely win a trophy.


    • Cynthia Gaines gold member
      October 11
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      I'm in the same frame of mind... tired and ready to zzzz...

      Thank you for the kudos on my poem!! Although it won't be winning any award, because it's my own contest!! I didn't even know we could enter our own poetry in our own contests, but I saw someone else do it, and I learned something new!! We just cannot place our own work in the "Preliminary Finalist" category, or give it a trophy... Thanks again, you really made my day complete with your positive self, and your happy little .gifs all over the place!!
      Peace always,
      xx Cyn


  • sweet arrival gold member
    September 28

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    beautiful! lovely picture and your muse flows so fluidly here with it.


  • Naridill gold member
    September 28

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    Truth at its best. And as stated below, nice wisdom and hard fact, you have placed them both together beautiful and created a unique aura. Nicely penned.


  • An Old Codger gold member
    September 27

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    So well stated with fact and wisdom. A joy, thanks.


  • michael thomas
    September 27
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    Nicely done.


  • arafura gold member
    September 27

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    "time will never stop
    being itself, even when
    it faces itself..."

    Now who is the philosopher my friend? Wonderful work!

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