you've thinned and left a trail-
a certain essence that i've failed to notice,
while you were in my presence.
you departed
left me feeling nostalgic
you were my home.
you shine
radiating elegance
not to mention your strictly arched back,
broad shoulders,
your chin peeling itself from your neck.
fluorescent
like the angel you are.
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i am connected.
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Loved It!! :)
This is awesome!
I really Loved..
U did an really amazing job...
You are awesome..
Wish i could write as good as you!! : ) -
prettyyyy and mysterious. it's too short. you should add to it because it ends too quickly i think
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I disagree, I think it covers my point.
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