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Apple Picking

strolling through the orchard
the vast blue sky is above me
the smells of  fall are in the air



Pluck an apple right off the tree
it beckons to you to bite it
but  you must resist  the temptation


Through the fields we romp
feel so free
all the stress i've felt lately
is gone
at least for the moment


Oh the joys of fall
that apple picking brings

Author notes

today i went apple picking and doing so inspired this poem. it is not one of my best but at least my writer''s block is gone.

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