No matter what you do
No matter what you say
I'll always be feeling this,
The thirst for the end
Will always be there
But you just won't let me go
I'll never be over it
It'll never be ok
I'll always be living in the nighttime
Searching for the day
And once you were my sunlight
But now your shadows never end
I'm gonna lock my doors
And shut my eyes
Maybe I'll forget you
For just one night,
With crimson lines
And wishful tears
I'm letting go tonight
Comments
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very good
i love the word crimson <3 -
Hey, very cool poem you have here. I was not sure what I was going to come across when I searched for a poem at random to read. I am glad the computer fed me this one though because it was definitely right up my alley for what I wanted to read at the moment. It definitely has a great flow to it and a lot of good, raw emotion. I liked your use of words in this as well, and although short, it captured your feelings well. Anyways, awesome job with this poem, I am glad I was able to read it, and keep on penning!
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very good
I enjoyed this poem. The flow is good and it is filled with intense emotion with just a few stanzas. good write!
Sarah
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