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Ride On

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Walking his horse as he rode into town
His hat pulled down low, one pistol tied down
Riding far south, from fame he had run
Away from his past, the way of the gun

Music caught his ear from a cantina’s door
He thought he’d step in for a drink, maybe more
A dimly lit room with few people inside
He could finally relax, no need now to hide

“Uno cerveza”, his order was placed
Leaned on the bar, he enjoyed just one taste
What happened next was a nightmarish blur
He’d hoped against hope this would not occur

He heard his name called from the door on his right
Another one itching to take up the fight
He prayed that this man would just let it go
His prayer was answered, the answer was no

That challenge was met, no emotion, no fear
Another death added to this hated career
His speed with a gun has not been matched yet
He’ll ride on once more, to another sunset

 

 

 

 

Author notes

Picture Prompt: Cowboy on Horse

Picture Credit - http://media.photobucket.com/image/recent/rebelgirl1292/ewing-galloway-cowboy-and-sunset.jpg

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  • Paloszoo gold member
    October 20

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    Oh, I love this tale. Such creativity and imagery. I felt as if I was there. Thanks for entering my gazillion prompt contest. It’s an honor to read your work!


  • FransB gold member
    October 18

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    Read as I tried

    I could not go faster than you allowed! I took each word and line to mind feeling the tide. It took me back to 'Nevada' by Zane Grey (I think it was) the only 'cowboy book' I ever read and truly enjoyed. My father loved them but I loved 'cowboy and crook' films; not many of them around, at least not in South Africa! Great right. Frans


  • Rheea gold member
    October 11

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    another sunset.. you are one of the few true  cowboy poets on here .


  • glenn shannon silver member
    September 28
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    i love your cowboy writes i think its a past life thing so very real cool stuff Paul


  • azlyn gold member
    September 27

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    Wonderful and so brutally honest as always...the pic is great. You do capture the true spirit of the old west in every line!



    Az


  • Swangrnv gold member
    September 27

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    you do..

    the cowboy proud my friend, always love these stories of the west..reminds me of watching the ole westerns on tv back in my youth..exciting and always interesting..


  • Night Hope gold member
    September 27

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    And there will always be those who want to challenge his speed, to take his unwanted fame from him. Good luck in the contest, Cowboy.




  • Cynthia Gaines gold member
    September 26

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    Powerful...

    I smell gold here. Good luck in the contest, Poet!!
    Peace & Hugs,
    xx Cyn xx


  • rbruce gold member
    September 26

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    A tremendous write my friend, I feel sorry for the damn cowboy with the gun. Peace is never easy to find, guess that's why it's so valuable.

  • madimar
    September 26
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    very nice

    I like your poem and wouldn't change anything.

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