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Paparazzi

Smile for the camera because your face is finally on TV, blushing like you wouldn't believe. Turn away, into the dark, see that you've got no where left to run. Falling deeper into the night, you speak a word but there's no one left to hear. Your finally breaking down.

(Cause when its only you left, you loose all self-consciousness)

When the day begins to break,you fall to your knees, begging please oh please. Forgiveness is redemption, in this world of hate, torture and fate. But when your fate starts to turn for the worse, you just gotta get back up and believe in love.

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i might add more latter

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  • musiccraze2009
    November 21
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    I think you should add more, but tis a good start! I think you have started a very interesting piece. Good luck and great write!

  • ooh this could be a good song!


  • darkscorpia silver member
    September 26
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    Its kind of confusing with the sudden mood change, but I like it.


  • xXxBrokenDragonxXx
    September 26
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    i like it i was there when you wrote it!!!omg....well i am here while you wrote it.....AHHHH!!!!! D: i is cunfusled.....grrrrrrrr