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It won't Go

Music is in my soul
and I know it won't go.

Part of me I know,
and I pray it won't go.

I feel it in my heart,
that rhythm just won't go.

Poetry with sound speaks,
saying "No, I won't go".

Each beat and every note
proves that it won't go.

And blessed is that round
repeating it won't go.

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  • CarolDesjarlais silver member
    October 7

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    Choosing one word to repeat in similar phrase and two line repeat is good for repetition's beginnings. Thank you for entering this..yes, music can be demanding indeed.