I was alone,
terribly alone.
I remember being laughed at,
critized,
and hated by others.
And you were one of the others.
You were,
Them.
You hated me because of who I was before,
But one look at me today and you change your mind.
Do I need to guess why?
But How did you manage it?
How the hell did you get me to feel the way that I did?
You managed it so fucking well.
You made me really fall for you,
You really did, Morti.
Your words..
Were so beautiful,
Full of feelings,
Truthfullness,
And love.
I couldn't help myself,
The way you wrote was so captivating.
You seemed to have changed so much,
You said you had changed too.
You were SO fucking perfect,
You were everything I wanted in a man,
And you were every damn thing!
But as the conversation continued over the days,
I knew what was going on,
I suddenly figured you out.
I realized,
Oh yes I realized..
I knew you weren't interested in me.
You were only after one thing..
God..
Only one thing.
You didn't want me for me, Morti.
No you didn't.
Don't even fucking say you did!
I know the truth.
You had only looked at the new me,
And wanted one damn thing.
One damn thing!!
And I fell for it,
I sure did.
I started to love you.
You fooled me well,
You did.
But Morti,
Your the guy that a girl turn down.
Guys these days...is there anything else you want then sex? maybe a relashionship?
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again...sorry if i lack emotion.
Good write. the emotions of lost love and hatred shone through well. kinda made me think about you plotting your revenge in secrecy. good job.
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Raw and emotional poetry what more can a reader ask for?
Thank you so much for sharing these feelings and your talent as well.
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Wow
dang i'm sorry that happened most guys suck and its true most only want one thing and it sucks that they have to break a girls heart just to get
your an amazing writer
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I think there is at least one of these guys in every girl's past. I can think of one in mine. but it is right and true and good to forgive whatever transgressions(I know, sweet word... transgressions.) that they have done. Even if you don't feel like it.
in the end, it frees you from hate, greed, and the grip of the tormentor.
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nicely done
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I hate guys. But I love this poem.
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this is exellent,i tink us girls have all been there before.
its odd too coz i have a friend called Morti..MetalMorti actually.
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A sad message, but all too true. It's good you were able to see through the guise and put a stop to things before the escalated and you ended up with regrets. Nicely written, and a very deep piece.
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Ouch! I feel the pain in this! Great work at getting this out and a very good message indeed! I can relate to this ;-) x men smell
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