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same ol shit

if people would shut up, i think we all could have a better day
just grow the fuck up and listen to all the guiding god's providing
instead it seems we chose to ignore, and judge the things about each other ourselves
i'm sick of the waters we fill the sight, blurring all we have to see
if only we could close our mouths and do as we feel whats right
i hate to be the rebel that has you causing to face another way of life
but i want us to be a stronger family instead of pulling oppisite directions
you say it's everyday that you sit and pray for a better life
but its always been everyday you haven't tried a thing to change at all

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  • humblpye gold member
    September 29

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    It's important to say what's on your mind sometimes, even if you gotta vent, people do get the message, let me tell you, when it comes from the heart it's always true and you can't ignore that, it might take time but it will take! so long as the venting doesn't turn to anger and you end up in the same hole
    No one's perfect Ali, we're all poisoned one way or another, someone's got to take responsibility for others no matter who's right or wrong just don't ever become bitter look for the sweetness in life there's plenty of it around
    Take care, I been there


    • Ali - Pie
      September 29
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      yes, i agree. it feels good to get it down in a writing and reflect a little. thats why i love writing so much!
      thanks john!!!!