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Come Back To Me


There's once was a lamb and
A girl named Mary.
Now this isn't a story or fairy tale,
But it's contrary.

A nightmare, a scream, a
Different world from here.
Now welcome to this palace
Of loss and tears.

Within its pools, within its fire,
Now, now, dear friend,
It's not a dream, it's another
Place to begin.

Swirling in its hatred,
I see you're damned.
Now come back to me,
Before it's scammed.

Since you can't see,
I'm here beside you.
As I speak to your world,
The faintness is true.

Follow the monster into
The nightmare.
Come back to me, my
Friend, for your eternal scare.

The lake outside is
Sparkling blue.
Too bad you can't see
Its hue.

Now the snow is falling,
Six months have past.
I'm wondering when you'll
Return from the outcast.

Try to hear, try to see,
Open your eyes, disappear.
Whisper something, anything,
But make these shadows clear.

The world is fading, I
Know you're dead.
I'll meet you in death
Or in my head.

In my dreams, in my fears,
Come back to me, I need to see!
Speak those word that I yearn for.
Now I'm in darkness, so free.

Now you're back,
In my brain again.
I've missed you much,
My dear friend.

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