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Rythmic

Boom, boom
the sound of my heart awakens me
like the crash of thunder,
my dream has redeemed him.
Alive, only in memory but shattering
all the same.
The rhythm of my heart
matches my quickened breath,
nothing can match this music.
and within my minds eye,
I dance.
My head starts to nod,
as I fall back to sleep.
Once again I am awakened
by this nightmare-
and beauty of fear.

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  • dgoldberg
    October 16
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    very dark , but at the same time using juxtaposition of beauty and fear....