mooning
in Halloween night
naughty witches
Author notes
...JFTJOI...or green 
A contest entry
- Spring into Autumn haiku by Peteskid.
1400 points, ended October 6, 53 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Ha! Very clever! Took me back to the first time I got mooned... wasn't Halloween, but I'm still trying to decide whether it was a trick or treat
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well, I guess it depends of the 'moon', was it a nice shaped one, then certainly a treat
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very nice for a smile for the autumn season, a full moon and the witching hour takes on a new meaning...very well done, haiku -light, haiku-fright...or haiku naughty delight... thank you for this fun entry into the contest ...h
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Oh so wicked! More of a senryu than a haiku, with that pun on the word "moon" (which is a perfect Autumn image in traditional haiku).
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not naughty...nice...lol!
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I know mooning is like daydreaming
it made me wonder...hmm naughty
I have to recheck its definitio on webster
mmmokay maybe it's what I have i mind
or I could be wrong lol
I like it Mari
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A moon, Halloween night and witches.
Leave it to Gaze picture them mooning!!!!!
Ah, that clever, naughty mind!!!
M-C
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This is the first time I have ever read Halloween, haiku porn! No wait, there was that time I penned a Halloween limerick on a bathroom stall, "There was a Witch from Nantucket...."
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ahhaa...so you're the one!
[and by the way, that's not a good thing to do with a bucket]
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