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Diverse.Xx

Yes I am different,
Diversity is good.
I make a change,
Does it mean that I should-

No I won't say it,
You'd all worry and fret,
And even if I do,
It's something I'd regret.

My answers aren't clear,
They never have been.
But you understand me,
I'm filling up to the brim.

I wasn't make sense,
Not everybody does,
But what I understand,
Is that you thought I was.

I don't quite get it,
No-one else thinks I've changed,
At least I don't think so,
Have I rearranged?

Author notes

just about people changing, and how you dont realise it yourself.

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  • Topnotchsy
    October 22
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    Nice write. Your Author Notes are very true.


  • ClosedEyes
    September 27

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    Go Lozz.. Its your birthday.. We're gunna party like its your birthday.. :]
    I swear your poetry gets better each time i read it! Your soo gifted.. its annoying!
    I understand about people changing though.. i think we know that the best from all our experiences eh (;
    peg legg.. ahem.. ohhh sorry.. bad cough :] HAHA..
    Really really good poem (:
    only bad point i would say is that is makes my nogin actually have to think!
    but you know.. may be a good thing to actually use my brain once in a while sooo ..
    love yousss (:
    xoxox


    • Graciee
      September 27
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      Fankyooooooo!!

      *Giggless* Lollage. Pegleg--- Cough Coughhhhh.

      LOL. Yeaaaaaah.. shes coooooooool, ehh? XD

      Thankyouuuu!! Xx


  • Fallen-Thumper
    September 27

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    This is brilliant and i love the message and meaning in it, it makes me think and i relly loved it. Great job and well written! Excellent!
    and change can be good or for bad, whatever perspective you look at it in but sometimes change is needed just to move on.


  • MoonlitRoses
    September 26

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    This is really thought provoking. And sometimes it's sad when people change, but other times it's a really good thing. I guess it depends on one's opinion and the type of change. Anyway, this is a really great poem, and honestly makes one think. Amazing!!!! =]


  • XxXPunkRockerXxX
    September 26

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    change is good but it depends on what kind of change.
    i never notice people are changing unless its a big change lol im sure im not the only person who has to.
    i love this poem its full of meaning

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