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He got that right.

It seems unfair that fly can't I
when sighs can flee so well
and spun at reeds much more than me
whilst huzzing through this bell

My mault for being just a fan
unlarmed until I earn
whose holly rests in how it furts
to never take his turn

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  • nicki1
    October 25
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    This is excellent. Seriously.


  • Naridill
    September 28

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    Simply and stark in brevity. I think this piece works alone but would also feel with more added. The title was little bland but the body made up for that

  • zorman32
    September 26

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    Was grand as hurled and splotted there, whose parchment pained in such despair.

    Most excellent.


  • Oh.My.Juliet
    September 26
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    *makes you fly*


  • Oh.My.Juliet
    September 26
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    *makes you fly*


  • Discoveria
    September 26

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    Then maybe you should dole the rice,
    and moo a Derry dance.
    What better bray to wake the ice
    or choose a game of lance?

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