Give us war give us hate
Show us love as destruction
Let us see what makes you laugh
Let us meet your children
Love and war
Show us what chaos can
Bring to this world
Show us the sadness
For when they locked you away
From the famine jars
Or the locust nests
Sending the laughter and smiles away
When they chained you up
Thinking they could control you
Before you broke their homes
They begged your forgiveness
When you made them bleed
Crying as they took your children from you
And taught them to hate you
Show them how nice you can be
When you slit their wrists
Letting your small pets feed
Show them not to mess with you
Oh Mother chaos
Where are you?
Author notes
Poem about Eris, Ares, and aphrodite. just a poem a friend inspired me to write. thanks Boheen
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what do you think of it i think i maybe should change it
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thy words touch within empathy where chaos smiles.
and at the same time feeds within those shadows looming within this world
Keep penning on one stroke at a time
Bill
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Nice...
Dark, but well done...
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thanks
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hmm, you like poems with alot of killing and dieing dont you? lol but yeah, good poem girl, i really like it. keep up the good work and i cant wait till your net one
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well theres more for you to read..its your choice..
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well, send them on girl, i got nothing but time
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rather interesting.... the mood is... well... chaotic... lol. i guess that is one instance that that works with the subject of the poem itself.
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thats the point i was trying for.. thats what he inspired me to write
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