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I know
You hate silence

And that you cry
Hiding gloom
Under false glow

Often I put a warm kiss
On cold palm

Send some clouds
To wish you goodnight

You blush sometimes...

A contest entry

Tell me what you think.

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
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  • Ken-Maverick
    October 15

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    Awwwww...
    This is so shaweeeet,
    should've gotten more than a H.M.

    Ken


  • islekine gold member
    September 26

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    Another wonderful take!

    Thanks so much for entering!
    Best wishes in the contest and always!
    Write on and on...

    and


  • penman gold member
    September 26

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    Excellent

    Wow, so romantic and well expressed. Such a great take on the prompt. Best of luck in the contest


  • Sweet Impatience gold member
    September 26

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    I think that you did a great job on the prompt, the image that you paint with your words, is sad, but one that leaves a lasting memory.

    good luck
    Kat


  • VelvetWings
    September 26

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    A sad and engaging write. I like your take on the prompt and the calm feeling of your poem. Good luck in the contest!
    ~Sparrow


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    September 26

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    What a beautiful thought you have penned here! I hope that you do well with it. Thanks a lot for sharing it with all of us!




    Jeremy0826

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