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The Will To Live


The battle inside my soul
Bleeds constant discontent
Disbelief covers these willing eyes
Tears overwhelm a once clear and thoughtful vision
Constant reminders of past abuse
Fill the corners of a breaking mind
Emptiness fills the ripping of parts within my heart
Tearing them apart, thread by thread
Constant screams of heart ache and dread, ringing in my swollen head
The struggle to breathe fresh air,but it never comes
Spilling tears continue to drown a breaking heart
As my freedom is stripped from my soul
The will to fight, weary from these bleeding eyes of sorrow
These weary eyes of continuous grief
It does not cease
The shadows grip refuses to release
Held back by the struggles within my troubled mind
Restricing my free will ,tearing me apart, the faint will that lingers inside me
The will of strength,of a mending soul,the will to live,without the numbness of a cold dying soul. . .



Author notes

~ "Please Lord!" she cried out to the sky in agony and desperation as she dropped to her knees, clasping her frozen hands as she screamed, " Please! Save me from this continuous grief!" She begged aloud. . . ~


Well, i wrote this poem just a second ago and i was in the middle of a break down so this emotion in this poem is raw. I felt like just dropping to my knees and pleading for the will to survive through this mess i'm in in my life right now. To release me of my suffering that doesnt seem to ever stop.

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  • Goddess of illusion
    October 1

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    Oh WOW!!!!!!!!! I FELT EVERY WORDS SIS!!!

    It is truly beautifully sad, excellent word choice and once again, amazing. I can touch the sadness, feel it deep within, and cry with you on this one.... Most times, the writes with raw emotion, is totally the best, because then we can relate....
    *bows*

    just wow....

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  • God of Thunder
    September 26

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    Such a beautiful yet deeply sad write here. It broke my heart bringing back memories but I promise that you can heal. I think that it forces us to look deep within ourselves and find our inner strength. Just know you are nit alone and will be in my prayers.