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Pearl

Today we laid her neath the sod
Friends and family gathered 'round
Mixed tears of sorrow and of Joy
Her soul now in the hands of God


No more sickness - no more pain
This World's loss is Heaven's gain
Take heart loved ones left to mourn
That you will see her once again

( Farewell Pearl )

Author notes

Pearl was a feisty lady - kind and loving here below - at 79 she lost the battle with cancer - This pearl of great price.

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  • condor gold member
    October 21

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    This was just so beautiful and a piece which I think Pearl would have appreciated...no does appreciate cause there is life beyond and I am sure she has smiled upon you for this dedication. Just superb in my book.


  • J aime Coudre silver member
    October 7
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    I think this is a beautiful tribute to a wonderful lady.

    • Dobar Dan
      October 7
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      Thank You J -

      Life goes on - thanks for the applause - Bless God - Joe - dobar dan --------------------------------------------------------------------------------- be of good cheer my dear


  • sonik
    October 4
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    oh that's pretty...considering written for such occasion i would not put smileys
    like it a lot

    • Dobar Dan
      October 4
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      Thank You Sona

      I wrote this to put on a sympathy card to her husband - he is not too well either - glad you liked it - be of good cheer my dear - hugs - Josipe - dobar dan xxx ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- peace - thanks for the comment/compliment/applause -


  • poetryality silver member
    October 2

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    Sorry to hear of your loss. My condolences and sympathies. You wrote this with great passion and hordes of love. May she rest in eternal peace. I am sure you will miss her but she fought the good fight to have lived as long as she did, especially after battling cancer.


    Blessings & LOVE ♥

    Renee

    • Dobar Dan
      October 2
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      Hello Renee

      Thanks for the comment and applause - life goes on - what can we do? none will escape but we can rest in the knowledge that eternal life starts with death - Bless God - Joe - dobar dan ------------------------------------------------------ cheers


  • James Aguilar
    September 27

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    James Aguilar

    Yes it is sad. I know if pearl didn't meet Jehovah I know God will resurect pearl like all others. John 5:28, 29. It is a very nice poem Joe. All your poems are great.
    Remember everything has a solution even death.

    -Bless Jehovah God-

    • Dobar Dan
      September 30
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      Hi James

      Sad - not really - the day we die is the day we live - it's the most important day on this death journey we are on - thanks for the comment /compliment and applause - Bless God - Joe - dobar dan ------------------------------------------- peace


  • Lulu Gee silver member
    September 26
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    Hello dear Joe, this sounds like a sad time for you and this verse depicts your sadness with love.
    Take care dear.....Hugs Lu x

    • Dobar Dan
      September 26
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      Thanks Lulu

      Well - not sadness for Pearl really - but for the ones left behind - thanks for the comments/applause you take care too my dear - Joe - hugs xxx


  • Talking Toni gold member
    September 26

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    Beautifully sad....

    Hi Joe...I am sorry to hear of your loss of a friend here. You have tributed her quite well in this short but endearing piece. You are right, this world's loss is heaven's gain for those who know and love the Lord and pass from this life to the next. Your rhyme is very nice and does not trivialize this sad time at all. But it does display care and respectfully gives comfort to those who were blessed to be touched by Pearl's presence in their lives. Thanks for sharing and again, my condolences to you and Phyllis at this time of mourning. Bless God!!! ~~~Toni~~

    • Dobar Dan
      September 26
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      Thank You Toni

      For the Comments/Compliment and applause - our mourning is short-lived then turns to joy when we give our head a shake and realize that this time on Earth is short-lived - like the morning dew; here at dawn - gone by noon - I was thinking to-day that we are here on borrowed time - Bless God Toni - Joe - dobar dan

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