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White Noise

 

Pictured on flights of fantasy

In the middle of nowhere

Hopes of stardom emerged...

 

With a spilt second chance

And an award winning smile

Dreams grew wings...

 

But with every camera flash

She saw white.

 

Oblivious to those around her

The world of glamour beckoned

Drawing her into a tighter embrace...

   

Til she saw nothing

Blinded by her own talent.

 

And with each success

Cheers from her fans became

White noise...

 

The lines were open

But she couldn't hear.

 

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  • xeroabyss II
    October 27

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    "A lot of peopel have come to this town [Hollywood], but not me. Now if you'll excuse me, I have to read a story to my adopted Canbpdian child. *claps hands* Nannies, produce the child and the story."
    -Comic Book Guy


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    September 26

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    Really like what you did here! We can become blinded easily in such a way!


  • PrInCeSsOfRoCk gold member
    September 26

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    facinating take on the prompt. i really enjoyed reading it. particularly liked the last two lines of the piece.

    thank you for entering