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it started with a lie

The one person
I really thought I could trust
to always be there
someone I could rely upon

but now I find
you're not so different
to all the others

everything we had
everything we shared
was built on lies

everytime I asked
you knew nothing
but in reality
you knew everything

everything that could have saved her
everything that might have helped me
and yet you kept quiet
continued to hide behind the lies

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  • darlee77 gold member
    October 24

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    It does hurt reallly bad when someone lets you down. Very descriptive and a good message. God bless.


  • PandorasBox
    October 2

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    Ouch...& doesn't it feel like it was downright sadistic of them to hold back & just watch what you went thru, when they could have changed everything? I can totally relate


  • Reptile Lady gold member
    September 26

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    Wow this is sad and deep
    I guess the truth does hurt
    I often wonder whether to tell people things or keep it a secret and its a very hard decision to make.
    I ponder, and I rip myself apart.. knowing not knowing, what is best what is not.
    I hope what ever it is and whom, can be resolved...
    and for you to take time to absorb and take a deep breath
    Love ya
    Julie x