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There are new staryucks flavors?
I don't care.
I can get dome- shaped hair?
I don't care.
I can win a million dollars?
Big deal.
I can feel better with this new fangled pill?
I doubt it.
I have this quick fix for you...
Yeah, what about it?
The new usphone has new aps.
Do you think I really give a damn about that?
I'm not interested.
So sick of the gimmicks, and deception.
Is this all we're reduced to?
Is this really what's important to you?
Stuff, and junk, and diet pills.
I think my brain is starting to congeal.
Is there a pill for that?
Get out of here!
I can't take the balogna anymore.
This can't be what humans are here for.
Massive consumption, and commercial overload.
Just watch the t.v. and do what you're told.
Ka-ching...
Sold.

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  • Tigerblood
    November 18

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    Very true

    Love this poem!

    it's getting pretty disgusting huh?? they have 100,000 "apps" for those stupid phones. I get crazy looks because I have just a "normal" cell phone.

    Awesome as always!!!

    s
    -me



    • Thoughtful Seeker
      November 19
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      Thanks. It just blows me away how materialistic our society has become. It's really quite laughable, and very sad. I actually had this cashier tell me that if she didn't have her cell phone she would die, I think she really believed that, lol. It shocks people when I say I don't have a cell phone because I don't like them. They look at me like I'm crazy. It's just a personal choice, and it works for me. I guess I'm a little anti-establishment because all those gooey ridiculous commercials piss me off, I dunno.


  • sidewinder silver member
    September 26

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    agreed my friend! Today it's about the money. greed flows while some suffer in that greed!

    keep penning on one stroke at a time!
    Bill