No matter when I needed you
No matter big or small
Close to death or loving life
You’d never answer my call
I wasted so much time
Trying to make things fit
I’ve cried for the last time
And I’m telling you now:
I FUCKING QUIT!
I quit with all your issues
With all your fucking lies
With your whining and your yelling
And being the only one who tries
Your excuses are quite worthless
I really couldn’t care
You can pout and whine all you want
You can say that it’s not fair
You want to know what’s not fair?
Taking it all in strife
So pick up your shit and take your crap
And get the fuck out of my life
What do you think?
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Once again, a great piece. It's very honest and to the point and that just adds to the amazingness. && I can relate to this piece a lot. I usually don't really care for rhyme, but yours doesn't seem forced and it adds to the piece. I really love the ending too.
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If we were all as honest and to the point like this, no one would ever waste time with unwanted people in their lives. Some people are just bad for you, no matter how much we reason they aren't. I know some people would find the expletives offensive, but I see a raw, nearly brutal honesty in them. There is no sugarcoating here, thankfully. It wouldn't be the same brash screw-you-now-get-out. I know the speaker has no regrets, surely. It doesn't hurt either that it rhymes tastefully. Nice, really, really nice.
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