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Wind


biting and frisky
tingling my skin and leaves
transform limb by limb

*  ~  *

colors escaping
rapture in spring and autumn
ambushed by nature





A contest entry

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  • BluRosePoet8488
    September 26

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    Tang,
    Great to see your poetry again!I like this... a great observation there too! I think you nailed both seasons well. A wonderful write! Keep the ink flowing and good luck!
    ~Donna~


  • Cynthia Gaines gold member
    September 26
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    Wonderfully Refreshing!!

    Absolutely beautiful imagery!! Best wishes in the contest!!


  • Peteskid gold member
    September 26

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    There are some good ideas in these poems, the "limb by limb" a very nice observation and image there, some very nice descriptions here, good narration too, Thank you for this fine entry into the contest and best of luck in the judging...PK


  • Melodies
    September 26

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    A poem of nature's rapture, written by a real outdoors man I am SURE! Every word speaks of the season's wily seductions and makes the reader so glad she is visiting you.