The wind tends to itself,
helping to push along the seasons,
I turn as leaves fall around me-
gloriously colored in deep amber and gold hues.
slight chill in the air,
jackets pulled tighter
murmurs of missing the Sun's rays of days that are forever gone.
Soon, Winter's frost shall entomb this land, and silvery grays will be seen.
pictures will lose their definition,
and I along with them.
How I long for the spring, flowers poking-
their heads out of the ground, after a long and dreary sleep.
Birds chirping,
rejoicing over a new arrival.
These seasons,
they come and go,
leaving a little piece of me behind.
Author notes
www.allpoetry.com/dragonbabyx3
I apologize for any spelling errors, which will be fixed as soon as I am near a computer. I wrote this using my phone!
A contest entry
- September Equinox - for Poetic Bandits Group Only by CitrineSunrise.
1750 points, ended October 4, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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i just love the imagery you've penned here! lovely job with this piece hun
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For many the cold winds of winter led to a case of depression. I loved your conclusion that each season captures a small part of you. Thank you for your entry. Peace, Liz
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Beautifully done!
I feel the same mixed emotions as the winter approaches. I am already looking forward to spring!
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A nice enjoyable poem of the season's including some nice imagery,beautiful Well Done......George...
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Dear poet, this is such a beautiful poem!! A little taste of joy of the seasons and passing time. The flow and the imagery, I agree, are stellar. I loved this poem.
All my best,
Zach. -
Just to know we can enjoy life
Is the greates gift we can ask for, from day to day. How blessed we are from day to day...mac
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You phoned up a lovely poem full of life and season changes. Great imagery and flow! You have captured the season change well with reasonable expectations of the harhness ahead and a wish to hurry the arrival of spring. Very nicely done, write on dear Bandit!
Brother Dennis
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Wow hun, this is beautifull! Such imagery that just draws you in and makes you appreciate this time of year that is coming. . . Even though I surely hate it! You make me see the beauty again through these words X DD
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