I hunt inside myself for all the pieces
so that I may mend my shattered heart
a chance for cherished memories
a way to a brand new start.
Maybe forgive my past mistakes
lessons taught time and time again
introduce myself to me once more
try being my own best friend.
Then after all the shame subsides
and my reflection is there to see
I will search for what beauty lies beneath
and then I will finally find me.
Author notes
This is written by my hands, but sang from my heart.
Thank you for reading.
Please tell me what you think
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Beautiful....
I just loved it... this left me a bit speechless(which is good)...
'Maybe forgive my past mistakes
lessons taught time and time again
introduce myself to me once more
try being my own best friend.'
Well penned, dear poet...
illusion
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Aww, I love the end! It pours hope into your piece!
Lovely work!
Keep writing!
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Excellent!!....I think everyone can relate to this....awesome write!!
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yes yes...
this one is the best of yours i've read so far...why? difficult to analyse but its got structure, story and theme all in equal measures. what i like best though is that it's "audience friendly"...this piece is ironically very self-possessed but at the same time easy to share with the reader. sorry for the over-deep comments but it is more crafted this one and worth thinking about. thanx. sunday.
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wow this is really good
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