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Ghost of the loveless

Loveless of the fallen


Emotionless and heartless

Lost in tears

Tears turn to ice

Like diamond dust

In pain and feeling dead

I'm just like a ghost

Ghost of the loveless

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  • Br0kEn WiNgS
    October 11
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    magnificent

    loved its simplicity abd depth, the whole thing worked really well. Great job.