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Dead

Withered and beaten
this fragile body...
Controlled and forgotten
this broken mind...
Stomped and tortured
this bleeding heart...
Lost and closed off
this wandering soul...

Find me I beg you!
I scream from inside
but silence you hear
for I am forgotten...
Wake my body
I am not dreaming
but dying a slow
horrible death...

I"m bleeding on the floor
can't you see me?
I need you to save me
Oh God I beg you...
Please save me
I can do better
Find me I beg you!
I scream again...

Withered and beaten
this fragile body...
Controlled and forgotten
this broken mind...
Stomped and tortured
this bleeding heart...
Lost and closed off
this wandering soul...

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  • Suicidal-Dreams1
    October 19

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    Nice

    this makes me think abuse, I have gone through the same thing and it hurts to know that you think that no one is there to help you.