within
I encompass life
smiling and breathing alike
falling from great heights
I scare myself awake
twisted in a sacred dance
of vitality
and increased heart rate
loyal and strong
I dedicate every breath
to displacing energy
in the great chaotic universe
my soul consists of
jarring, abrupt movements
Red Rover of a finish line
and I float
as a drop of water
in very own ocean
Author notes
I have always seen some sort of beauty and poetry in the Gatorade commercial where drops of water become people who do random activities. I tried to find a youtube video, but there's way too many gatorade commercials for me to sort through 
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my soul consists of
jarring, abrupt movements
Red Rover of a finish line
and I float
as a drop of water
in very own ocean
awesome lines hun well penned Hugs angel
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This is a really neat poem. It's well written and I like the form of it.
Thank you very much for your entry
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