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This addiction will kill me
But I can't stop it now.
They're sliding off quickly
And I won't let it stop.

Sometimes it frightens me;
Nevertheless I'm happy.
When six multiples by five
I'll gladly say they're gone.

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  • KnightOfTheRose gold member
    September 27

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    Ah very nice. And yes addictions can be terrible things....just awful. Sigh....but life goes on. "Sometimes it frightens me;" perfectly understandable of course. Anyway, great job on this poem.


    -Steve-