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clockwork

tick tock, tick tock,
blood poors down and orange clock,
what do you do, what do you say,
who do you kill, who do you slay!
tick tock, tick tock,
do what the say, do what they say!
rip, slash, mangle, rape,
you cant get away, you cant get away!
clockwork turning in your head,
screaming as though to wake the dead!
blood red eyes, and maddening smiles,
sip the blood and marvel the wiles!
tick tock, tick tock,
walking corpses all around,
grining blood red dripping maws,
cant rape the dead if you have no head!
bleeding flesh and taunting bodies,
lay with the dead, and never...wake...again...
...
...
mirror, mirror, on the wall...who's the fairest of them all...

Author notes

a cross inspiration between the book A Clockwork Orange, and the band Cradle of Filth.

prompt: B/4 i became insane with horrible moments of sanity.

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  • NICE!!! i really like this poem!! and i loooove cradle of filth really really well done. Thanks for entering and good luck!!


  • iamthebeatles
    November 6

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    Incredible. this is horrific at it's best. You gave me the sort of insanity i would expect from Poe. Bravo! he i am sure would be proud.

    Peace
    Cassie